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FIRST PUBLIC GLIMPSE OF MY BOOK

Sat Oct 25, 2008, 12:30 PM
Well thursday night i told my self this weekend no jacking off (not literally) I was going to work on some of my book and get half way in Persona 3: FES without watching a ton of anime and before 4 I've already done all my errands and I did a small part of my book.

FYI I couldnt think of a good title & it's not supposed to be my best work it's a rough for a rough.

I got the urge to write (usually I do but not much) and I actually did it on the computer after my cellphone told me that it would only allow 160 for notes and i did 3 notes full. It's not the best for a first post but better than not posting anything. The book is going to be pretty actiony. But its going to be like Asssassins Creed (and games like this>>;) violent but it has a lot of ideas and philosophy in it.
The main character is me but its only non-fiction me till about age 13-16.5 then shit happens. Which I will most likely post up as the second public glimpse this weekend.
I've rewritten the book 3 times now persay. You see I was never... ok I have gotten really far in it. Notes alone in my third draft numbered around 90 pages front and back... holy shit i did 180 pgs of notes i just realized. My first draft still has the same concep... nvm it was loosely based like background powers and main characters but the second half was completely different. I am thinking of making the book a series 2 through OVER 9000!(sry couldnt resist)
Originally I was going to speed it up and have had it just one book then I thought "u know I'll do prolouge in the book to help explain!" Then I thought "You know I'll make the prolouge the first half of the book!" Then I realized I had the book on course to around 600-800 pgs. So I said to myself "You know I'll make the first half into 4/5 of the book then I'll have the 2nd half be shorter than the first."
I'm basically on that Idea at the moment expect It's more of 97.5% of the book now. In my first draft I had it too fantasy and it didnt seem like it would catch on at all. So I dimmed it down and added some scientific reason to it subtley. Then on my 3rd draft i added main characters and support characters and a much deeper story. In the 4th draft(current) I changed so much making everything longer and the story became extremely deep compared to all but the last draft, I added in tons of main and supporting characters, I completely redid fictional Curt and I really put some controversial topics and happenings in the book. LIKE the one i posted.

Just like my book i made that journal way longer than I had intended.

  • Mood: Bewildered
  • Listening to: Rock on my Zune
  • Reading: Brisingr
  • Watching: lots of anime
  • Playing: Spore
  • Eating: chocolate
  • Drinking: Water

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  • Current Residence: MA
  • Interests: Art, Video Games, Girls, Anime, Manga, Hentai, Writing, Girls, Drawing, Animating, Reviewing
  • Favourite genre of music: ROCK, Techno, and not gay rap. Rap is just poems or talking in a beat.
  • Favourite artist: Me, Chelsea Ward, Twokinds (Tom), Ctrl+Alt+Del (Tim)
  • Favourite poet or writer: Me, Eric Nylund, Christopher Paolini
  • Favourite photographer: Nick Scovelle ,Erin Robinson (i wish me)
  • Favourite style of art: Highly Stylized
  • Operating System: Windows
  • MP3 player of choice: Zune, Its so much better
  • Shell of choice: I dont understand the question
  • Wallpaper of choice: It changes so much
  • Skin of choice: ... mine (lol jk)
  • Favourite game: Legend of Legaia, FF7, Fallout 3, CoD4, Oblivion, CoV/CoH,
  • Favourite gaming platform: Xbox 360 rankings 1st 360, 2nd PS3, 3rd Wii (Wii was a disapointment)
  • Favourite cartoon character: Clare or Teresa (Claymore IS THE SHIT)
  • Personal Quote: All give some, Some give All...
  • Tools of the Trade: Anything I get my hands on (Im not joking)

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